小学六年级的英文作文范例

儿子学校布置了家庭作文，3周时间写一篇科幻类的作文。今天，他给我看了看前面的2章，我大吃一惊，谁说美国的小学教育不行，乖乖，儿子的作文已经比我写得好了！句式的运用，语言的活泼，想象力的丰富，天，我再次明白我的思想有多僵化了，又在这里感叹为什么语言要从娃娃抓起了，得，我当个打字员，把他没有完成的作文记录在电脑上，语法错误我也没有改，根本有些用法我自己也不知道对不对，口语化很强，这也算是他成长的记录吧！

Super Study Machine

Chapter 1 UFO

The endless plain is shining under the sky, no mountain, no basin, it is as peaceful as the sea that has no wind. The wheat is so orderliness, like the god have already measured for it, made it look just like the mirror.

"Moria," yelled the old man that's far away bhind, seems like a sharp knife that cut the quiet space.

A boy got out from the field, it is a normal young boy, the only thing that's noticeable is his sharp little eye.

"Ah".The boy heave a sigh, runnin down the field to meet his father.

"Where have you been all day long?" the 40 year's old man mumbled."I already finished my work, so I went to play a little bit". Little Moria answered. "Fine, let's go home."

The old Bonda took his son home. Moria was Bonda's only son, is a very understandable little kid, Bonda almost never worried about him after 3 year's old, but every time he sees Moria's sharp little eye, he have a deep impression about his wife.

This is the world that as called "Magical land". There're no technology, no car, no computer     and pretty much, that's all Moria know about it.

The place where Moria lived in is a district that's owned by KN. Skola (KN. stands for knight). Thirty years ago, Skola's dad, KN. Staka, leads a number of homeless peole to this desolate land and after thirty years of hard working, it made it the way it is today.

Today is the day that KN. Skola come back from the war, all the people in the district come to the front area and wait for him, include Bonda and Moria.

"I saw him, I saw him", a person right next to Moria pointed his finger toward north yelled with cheer. Soon, the crowd is cheered up, because KN.Skola is really nice person, for he only collect 6% of tax once a year on the profits, and other nobles collects more thant 11% of the profits in their land.

"Quiet down everybody" Skola's wife shouted, it made everybody quiet down for a moment, but not long after Skola step into the village, "Welcome back, KN.Skola, welcome back" everyone yelled with tears in their eye, no one noticed that Moria just left.

Moria went to the field that he always want to, he sat down and starring at the blue sky thinking about what kind of world it is. Today is a very hot day, the sun is shinning madly like it is tring to beat the plants and unfortunately that effects to Moria too. "Holy toast, I need to get some water." Moria said to himself, turn toward his house. "Shiyyy, wooooo" all of a sudden, a huge U.F.O appeared, running down like a falling star. Moria turned back, opened his eyes as big as he could, his mouth is largely opened too, the impossible looking in his eyes and the astonishment in his face, tells you how he feel now.

SPLAAAASH, the huge explode sent Moria over 10 meter away, that made Moria faint. Hours and hours past and finally Moria is awaken. "Where am I now?" "Aaaa!" after a short head hurt, Moria remember everything that happening. "Let's go and find anything is remaining after the huge plate exploding" Sure, Moria don't know what is U.F.O, all he know is it looks like a huge plate.

Moria walk toward the exploding place, and he was astonished again. There is a enormous basin in the place now, no plants, no trees, not even a bug. "Fortunately I turned back to get water, if not, I 'm probably became a cup of sand now." As he walk closer and closer, he saw a blue hat sitting in the middle of the basin.

Chapter 2 Super Study Machine (未完待续)

有些语法和句式错误，我也照搬了，等他写完，我全部打上来，天，他到美国才一年多，其英文思维方式形成了。文化和环境的力量真是惊人！